Independent Research Projects Conducted by Undergraduate Researchers (UR) and Continuing Undergraduate Researchers (CUR) Enrolled in the Accelerated OCE1001, OCE2013 and OCE3014 Labs at Daytona State College
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Friday, April 17, 2020
Jenna Fairchild (UR) - Conserving a Special Florida Coral!
Jenna--this is looking great. The only addition I can see in your title is that you need to let the viewer know it's a proposal. E.g., ...that doesn't need a symbiont: a proposal to investigate...
Also...I see on slide 6...you are no longer looking at a 'relationship'. Recall that when you are looking at a relationship/correlation, you would use a scatter plot. You are using a bar graph as your 'proposed' graph based on your data collection of counting the number of coral at each site.
I think the more important issue would be--getting to the point in the title! ...this coral may be a game changer and THE species to save reefs due to climate change so why not just say that? e.g., Oculina varicosa: a proposal to study a possibly climate-change resistant coral located on Florida's central east coast...or something like that.
Jenna--this is looking great. The only addition I can see in your title is that you need to let the viewer know it's a proposal. E.g., ...that doesn't need a symbiont: a proposal to investigate...
ReplyDeleteAlso...I see on slide 6...you are no longer looking at a 'relationship'. Recall that when you are looking at a relationship/correlation, you would use a scatter plot. You are using a bar graph as your 'proposed' graph based on your data collection of counting the number of coral at each site.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the feedback. Is it acceptable to use contractions in the title? For example, I used "doesn't".
ReplyDeleteI think the more important issue would be--getting to the point in the title! ...this coral may be a game changer and THE species to save reefs due to climate change so why not just say that? e.g., Oculina varicosa: a proposal to study a possibly climate-change resistant coral located on Florida's central east coast...or something like that.
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